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    dots Submission Name: Hold me closer tiny tankerdots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsHold me closer tiny tankerdots
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    Mi s'more's dela Angelino,



    (Yep. Spell check.)



    Mia bello amore' della Angelo,


    While on a road trip with you in Virginia, you discovered "I'm a tiny tanker." "Hold me closer tiny tanker." A healthy laugh every time I hear this song. I love that you can still make me laugh even after passing. You thrive through thought and I think I understand what you where trying to explain to me. Through light I survive through thought I can thrive. Through & Through.

    Can angels (spirits) travel through spectrums? How about a manifested intention? Can it travel at the speed of light and by passage of light? Godspeed? An expression I heard once. Is that truly a term or a thing? Can love travel at the speed of light? Can vibrations and frequencies expelled from the heart or even projected from the chakras, to reach its ultimate destination?












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      This is a very moving poem. I also find it cathartic to speak to those who are no longer here to listen. Whether the message meets them or not, there is something in the exercise.

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