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    dots Submission Name: Kissing Evadots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.29 - 135/111/63
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Dedicated to the actress, Eva Green.


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    dotsKissing Evadots
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    Within her gaze
    I touch the sky
    A soulful haze
    For this is why

    She said it’s true
    I’m caught again
    This is for you
    Please tell me when

    Be gentle
    …and then…

    The warmth of a press
    The taste of her lips
    Nothing more for less
    For she slowly sips

    As if from a dream
    Frozen in time
    Silken – serene
    A passionate crime

    Such music
    …and then…

    If only by chance
    To feel such delight
    And wildly we dance
    The sweetness of flight

    The moment soon falls
    As eternity ends
    Her beauty, it calls
    A heart that she mends

    2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan




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    | Posted on 2017-01-30 00:00:00 | by elsicario | [ Reply to This ]
      It is well written, you have am ease for words it seems that all you really need is n idea. You actually give her more character than I had ever naturally perceived from my very little exposure to the actress. It is a credit to your abilities. Thanks for sharing. Posted on 2016-08-14 00:00:00 | by lori_tab
    | Posted on 2017-01-30 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]


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