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    dots Submission Name: The Web Of The Unseen dots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2121/2079/1562
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Web Of The Unseen dots
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                   At certain times we have
                   all wondered. Our own experiences
                   not ranging full enough.
                   far enough.






                   that velvet soft creatures
                   which crowd the entrances
                   to our dwellings seem
                   to
                                                           float. frantic.
















         
                                  Perhaps they love the light




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