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    dots Submission Name: Soardots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Take flight
    Your ultimate
    Be a better you
    Better than the
    Evolve Into
    Devine enlightenment
    Shine outwardly so
    That inspiration
    Is contagious.
    Spread your
    Seeds of knowledge
    So that our youth
    May be fruitful
    And better than you.
    Develop the minds
    Of the youth to be
    Confident in their
    Abilities and decisions.
    Soul shine.

    Submitted on 2017-03-02 01:10:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Who are you...William Shatner???

    I broke
    everloving hell
    are you writing?
    | Posted on 2017-04-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Ryner | [ Reply to This ]
      That is very uplifting
    | Posted on 2017-03-16 00:00:00 | by concrete_rose | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful. This is purposeful and meaningful life and also soaring high and evolving life. A life with a purpose, a life with a dream is a life with a path and destination. I loved your write.
    | Posted on 2017-03-16 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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