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    dots Submission Name: Soardots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSoardots
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    Take flight
    Soar
    Become
    Your ultimate
    Desires.
    Be a better you
    Everyday
    Better than the
    Past.
    Evolve Into
    Devine enlightenment
    Shine outwardly so
    That inspiration
    Is contagious.
    Spread your
    Seeds of knowledge
    So that our youth
    May be fruitful
    And better than you.
    Develop the minds
    Of the youth to be
    Confident in their
    Abilities and decisions.
    Soul shine.
















    Submitted on 2017-03-02 01:10:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Who are you...William Shatner???

    Bones,
    I
    think
    I broke
    my
    pelvis.
    What
    the
    everloving hell
    are you writing?
    | Posted on 2017-04-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Ryner | [ Reply to This ]
      That is very uplifting
    | Posted on 2017-03-16 00:00:00 | by concrete_rose | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful. This is purposeful and meaningful life and also soaring high and evolving life. A life with a purpose, a life with a dream is a life with a path and destination. I loved your write.
    | Posted on 2017-03-16 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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