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    dots Submission Name: Requiem dots
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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    dotsRequiem dots
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         the torrent of blood rushes to where it ought not to be
         and i have gazed and gasped and made a decision
         and fear and freedom. somewhere near also.


         

         the snow white steep drop of outside my body




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