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Magic Man


Author: Carosuel
ASL Info:    26/F/Twirlwind
Elite Ratio:    4.93 - 96 /73 /28
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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The second part of my duet. The part where I choose to stay and love.


Magic Man



Your heart has grafted over mine,
So I can feel it beat,
and bleed,
and break
within my chest.

If I could sketch our world,
it would be in disarray.
How ordinary,
how boring,
must it be to ink it in.

And you, you, you, you,
inescapable you,
with your aura,
and your candles,
and your trunk,
you are magic.

How we became one
escapes me every time
I deign to think on it.

but so, bit by bit,
your touch is mine,
your laugh is mine,
your heart.

It beats within me.




Submitted on 2017-03-02 20:33:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Haunting and sweet....like you, Precious One.
| Posted on 2017-04-28 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]


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