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Author: Daniel Barlow
Elite Ratio:    5.93 - 2138 /2109 /1700
Words: 51
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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               i think what i'd like you
               to say about me
               is that i recognized
               it didn't matter if
               there was catastrophe
               the slow steady drip
               or the single last drop
               just that all of
               this was thrown



               into making it full.




Submitted on 2017-03-02 22:37:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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