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    Author: Daniel Barlow
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    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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                   i think what i'd like you
                   to say about me
                   is that i recognized
                   it didn't matter if
                   there was catastrophe
                   the slow steady drip
                   or the single last drop
                   just that all of
                   this was thrown



                   into making it full.




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