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    Author: mmray
    ASL Info:    37/m/wa.usa
    Elite Ratio:    2.16 - 31/18/15
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    God of calamity
    the alcohol no longer sways the whole,death
    death in my heart
    trader,deceiver,liar
    i hate you...as much as i,i Love
    you are not you...not any more
    i don't know you,your virus... behavior
    you hateful creature,demon
    i'm walking away...today
    you've no power over my heart,soul,or being
    you've killed me as far as your concerned
    i phenix from here
    as i stand brushing off the ash of the past
    open my eyes to the new morning's sun
    i feel warmth and full
    filled with ,bless
    I'm blessed as are you




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      That is up-right and praise of God Almighty.
    | Posted on 2017-03-08 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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