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    dots Submission Name: another one lostdots
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    Author: Me Rambling
    Elite Ratio:    5.91 - 279/319/51
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsanother one lostdots
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    moonlight whispers in your eyes
    seeing sounds and hearing sights
    skin has faded to nothing more than,
    a faint reflection of the night

    so bring back the parasite
    i've seen your face growing dry
    how do you plan to overcome this weakness?

    it all seemed so real




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