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    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2126/2084/1587
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    1.                                                                                                                             
    So. What.                                        
    if you are courageous. contrite. congruent                    
    compliant. career girl. now-go.                    
                   go-on. about your business.                    
    mistress of empire. reverting to type. diverting                    
    your good natures. deeply committed. to the                    
    long standing. condition of non                    
                communication.                                   



                                                     you are not at all
                                                     wishy washy







    2.

               So what.



                        if that's you and that's great
                        then that's grand











    if that's your gig                                                                 



                                                                                                        3.


                                                      i don't mean it to seem like
                                                      i am flicking you the bird.
                                                      but. yeah. really. i am flicking you
                                                      the bird.





         


              4.

         Myself
    occasionally. me, i am. this still
    clean crisp. river. cycled thought
    stirred. into a clean clear
         liquid.               







                                                                                                                       5.

                                                                                              the job
                                                                                              i note*


                                                      comes
                                                      with


                        out
                         a cape.


                        .                              





    Submitted on 2017-03-14 19:15:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Girls like that like to think they are mainstream. I like to think it's us. We may not be superheroes but we are a force to be reckoned with.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-03-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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