[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: dots

    Author: Daniel Barlow
    Elite Ratio:    5.98 - 2124/2082/1579
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 649
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 9926


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    So. What.                                        
    if you are courageous. contrite. congruent                    
    compliant. career girl. now-go.                    
                   go-on. about your business.                    
    mistress of empire. reverting to type. diverting                    
    your good natures. deeply committed. to the                    
    long standing. condition of non                    

                                                     you are not at all
                                                     wishy washy


               So what.

                        if that's you and that's great
                        then that's grand

    if that's your gig                                                                 


                                                      i don't mean it to seem like
                                                      i am flicking you the bird.
                                                      but. yeah. really. i am flicking you
                                                      the bird.



    occasionally. me, i am. this still
    clean crisp. river. cycled thought
    stirred. into a clean clear


                                                                                              the job
                                                                                              i note*


                         a cape.


    Submitted on 2017-03-14 19:15:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Girls like that like to think they are mainstream. I like to think it's us. We may not be superheroes but we are a force to be reckoned with.

    | Posted on 2017-03-15 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Every..... written by jackz
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    AI written by poetotoe
    Bond written by saartha
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Fasade written by jackz
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Linger written by saartha




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]