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    Author: SincerWritinAsh
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Deep breath in,
    Forget to let it out.
    Try to keep the real spirit-
    The original essence of You...

    Before it escapes.




    Submitted on 2017-03-17 23:52:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      confidently we exhaled
    and cracked open the cage
    that let our fickle souls take flight
    on moonlight, and escape

    half around the universe
    curious and wild
    we absorbed all that we could
    from jumbled dreaming skies...

    Just a few thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2017-03-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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