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    dots Submission Name: Frühlingdots
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    Author: JanePlane
    ASL Info:    125/F/everyplane
    Elite Ratio:    6.76 - 415/433/130
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFrühlingdots
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    A tulip pushes through snow

    and we cling to that moment
    like a child in a crowd
    clings to mother

    like one hand clasps another in a storm

    We break through our own
    frozen fields

    We lean in the direction of the sun




    Submitted on 2017-03-21 18:24:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Jane,

    I have a smile because your life-affirming words make me feel good. Thanks for the moment.

    Jim
    | Posted on 2017-04-23 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      This is pure poetry. I envy your words, they flow so easily and beautifully.
    | Posted on 2017-04-06 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice sentiment of hope and promise -'tis the best we can do on any given day, IMHO. Additionally, a tulip springs from a bulb, an unseen source of lasting resolve so much more powerful than a mere seed. This speaks to me of faith.
    | Posted on 2017-04-05 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      pushing through the crust known as "what is"
    attaining the orbit of "what may be"
    roots locked tight to an atmosphere
    that can only dissolve under the weight of me

    another of my "pasts", like a gathering storm
    stacked on a fire to keep me warm

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2017-03-22 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes we traverse the treacherous tundra and terrain while we frigid fuck contemplate mystic symbiosis and lean in the direction of the sun. Elan vital.
    | Posted on 2017-03-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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