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    dots Submission Name: Always and Foreverdots
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    Author: helenastorm13
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    Words: 112
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    dotsAlways and Foreverdots
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    I sit here,
    The wind whispers in my ear.
    The lies all around me,
    Like a flowing sea.
    I want to run away from this place,
    And the lies that I remember when I see your face.

    The truths haunt me.
    The lies that taunt me.
    The things I said and
    The things I dread,
    They all follow me.
    They long to make me see
    I followed the path away,
    But, in truth, I was meant to stay.

    See, the paths we take
    Can tell us our sake.
    From a deep sleep, we may not wake.
    Like Sleeping Beauty, never awake.
    The eyes forever closed,
    Always and forever closed.




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