Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Take Flightdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 1103
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTake Flightdots
    -------------------------------------------



    Picking and choosing.







    Such is a caterpillar.











    Cocoon
    Metamorphosis
    The sky
    Wings to set
    Sail












    An enormous
    World to
    Explore









    Submitted on 2017-03-23 00:10:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      What's with all the empty space? The use of the music does not help your style, it distracts from it.
    | Posted on 2017-04-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Ryner | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201732

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Where is My Ghost written by ForgottenGraves
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Comparisons written by MyPeriodical
    Everyone written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Tired Vine written by MyPeriodical
    One day older, One year wiser. written by Rhythmal
    Legends written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Gone written by MyPeriodical
    Human Progression written by ForgottenGraves
    Labor Pains written by MyPeriodical
    Sanctimony written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Instances written by hyproglo
    not alone written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Remember written by MyPeriodical
    Scared written by MyPeriodical
    Chasing The Lie written by jackz
    HeroĆ­na written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Leyenda de Un Maldito Cobarde written by MyPeriodical
    I am still sorry. written by MyPeriodical
    Remedies written by MyPeriodical
    Giant written by MyPeriodical
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Two hundred and seven times written by MyPeriodical
    Rezar por la naturaleza written by MyPeriodical

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry