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    dots Submission Name: Take Flightdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/
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    dotsTake Flightdots
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    Picking and choosing.







    Such is a caterpillar.











    Cocoon
    Metamorphosis
    The sky
    Wings to set
    Sail












    An enormous
    World to
    Explore









    Submitted on 2017-03-23 00:10:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What's with all the empty space? The use of the music does not help your style, it distracts from it.
    | Posted on 2017-04-16 00:00:00 | by Jonathan Ryner | [ Reply to This ]


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