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    dots Submission Name: Lack of Intimacy dots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 947
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    Description:
       A poem about sex addiction


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    dotsLack of Intimacy dots
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    I can't breathe
    I hold my breath long enough
    Maybe I will enjoy my suffocating..
    Pressure builds in my mind
    All the wrongs and all my rights
    Afraid to look deeper for what I might find.
    Every time I come up
    I seem to be pushed back down
    This endless fight of never being enough
    I find solace in their embrace
    But they come and go too fast
    Forever running this pointless race
    I can't find love in people
    If I can't seem to feel it for myself
    Forever worshipping at your steeple
    Am I doomed to be a lone forever?
    My heart be cold
    But light as a feather
    Forever wondering
    Will I ever get my shit together?
    You can't expect respect
    If you give it all away and keep none for you
    This is no longer giving a desired effect.
    So it goes, you need more and more
    But no matter how many enter you
    You never know what you're doin it for
    Sex cannot replace love
    You know this time and time again
    But this is what you fall in the habit of
    You keep your heart safe by stayin in this spectrum
    But in the end of this tale
    You make yourself the victim




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      You can learn to love the lack of human touch as much as you naturally crave embrace... it becomes a secret to want someone, an un-whispered craving that you build a stone around, like sand at the core of a pearl. And once you perfect that, you become something Else... I've had both addiction and the state of Else, and I must say that the Else is better than relying on someone who constantly lets you down, whether they mean to or not.
    | Posted on 2017-03-28 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]


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