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    dots Submission Name: My Little Blue Birddots

    Author: poetotoe
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    dotsMy Little Blue Birddots

    My Little Bluebird

    Let me dream a little while longer
    before the dawn takes away my world
    once filled by songs of birds day and night
    their voices once flooded the very air I breathe.

    Awake, awake love that once sung within all mortals
    you know it will, sing, come, awaken love before its gone.
    Little Bluebird, sing your song open the hearts of mortal man
    the beast that stalks man cannot sing like you, my Little Bluebird.

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