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    dots Submission Name: The Liedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Liedots
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    The glass half full; half empty
    Personal perception I suppose
    Never mind, the fact there is no glass; only the illusion there is one

    Only a glass with vodka would I consider a glass half full
    All the rest are empty
    My perception tells me

    I ache for the skies above to rain drops of vodka
    To then have those drops touch my lips
    I contemplate the possibilities of coming home to find a smorgasbord of drugs

    How long would my contended disposition last?
    Would I stay on Cloud-9, or only be chasing it?
    My mind wonders around such unlikely events, nevertheless, I am consumed!

    So close to knowing and believing the truth
    Yet, not close enough, the lie still lingers close within
    Darkness is never far behind....




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      I felt a bit scared reading, "The Lie", I wanted to save you, "don't go home", I wanted to say, find a friend, go for a nice long run, oh yes, if you go for a nice long run, first you will become hot and sweaty, then after while you will get your second wind and feel you can run forever, then after running a bit more, you will hit runner's high, and the endorphins will flood your brain, and just between you and me, endorphins are endogenous opiods, that give us ecstasy without the downside.

    So relax and take my hand as we walk and run together through the Bush and sky.
    | Posted on 2017-05-02 00:00:00 | by yesmole | [ Reply to This ]
      Sometimes a lie can be a good thing. It becomes most difficult when trying to lie to oneself. It could be easy to fall back into old habits. To lie to yourself and tell yourself that you'd rather give in and debauch. A good lie would be to tell yourself that you have no desire to. Perhaps it will become easier with application and time. Resist girl, don't lose the sobriety you've worked so long to maintain!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-03-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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