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    dots Submission Name: Fragile Heartdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsFragile Heartdots
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    Curse my fragile heart
    And how easily it shatters
    Like glass thrown on the ground.

    I try to hide it, lock it away
    So no matter how hard you look
    It can't seem to be found

    I don't want to love anymore
    So I fuck to numb the pain
    Blurring the lines between fake & real

    I come & go, never tryin' to stay
    I run through men like a runaway train
    All because I don't know how to deal

    I thought I got better & healed myself
    But a few months later
    And I am back in my old habit

    See you can touch my body
    But never can you reach my soul
    Don't embrace this, I damn it

    So another lonely poem
    About the savage, sensitive girl
    Who plays men like a game

    But no matter how well I play
    My heart is still a shattered mess
    And I am the one who inflicts this pain





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    ||| Comments |||
      What a tragedy, to dumb play love without the love. Hold the love, you say, I don't want love with my fries. I want to stuff myself with McDonald's, I want to be obese, I want to be padded against the world.

    Love stings, and doesn't sing, love is a disappointment, and I am a disappointment. I don't love my lover so much, I obliterate them from my emotions. I am a war zone. I hate them so much I want to destroy them and stand triumphant amid the rubble.
    | Posted on 2017-05-04 00:00:00 | by yesmole | [ Reply to This ]
      Now would be a good time for the hero to come riding up on his starfish chariot with his lizard whip in hand to command his seahorses forward. Gumby himself. LOL. Whats to say girl......maybe this will help........

    http://www.eliteskills.com/z/183324

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-03-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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