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    dots Submission Name: Craving dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 259
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCraving dots
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    Starving artist, broken hearted, don't even get me fucking started.
    Up too late, up too early, I can't even get to sleep on time.
    I'm upset, an open book, but you won't flip the pages.
    Been in this bed for days and
    I can't bring myself to look in the mirror
    When all I see is failure.
    And I hear the voices next to me, inside of me, they are me
    And they tell me, Krystal you're a joke
    You're a mother fucking joke and
    Why can't you just get over it and
    Why the hell are you depressed?
    Why the fuck are you about to cry
    You haven't had a thing to make you cry
    And why the fuck are you breathing hard
    For christ sake, you're sitting down.
    Why can't you find the fucking reason
    To get this feeling out of your head
    You know it all your fault.
    Like he said, take responsibility for your problems.
    But how can I erase the sudden urge to drown myself
    How can I erase the years and years of hate?
    I crave adventure
    I want to he high
    I want to fuck in every star lined reflection.
    Someone fucking take me there,
    Take me to the sun and sand,
    Take me to the neon lights.
    Let fuck, and fight, and scream, and cry.
    Before we die-
    Let's have the time of our fucking lives.




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      "Starving artist, broken hearted, don't even get me fucking started." That's some T-Shirt level lyrics right there, I would wear that. :D Anyways all I have to say about this is: Krystal you're no fucking joke/Here take a line of coke/Jump up, dance a bit/And scream: To hell with it!
    | Posted on 2017-04-11 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      This was well-titled and well-described. But while you want, you still are living. And once you're done wanting, you're still living, but it's a new way that requires nothing from anyone. I've had both, and I think I prefer the latter. If you find yourself, you'll never need to try to pull something out of someone else that they just don't have inside of them. Until then, you're still a vampire.
    | Posted on 2017-04-06 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]


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