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    dots Submission Name: Pit Stopdots
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    Author: SincerWritinAsh
    Elite Ratio:    6.26 - 297/260/144
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsPit Stopdots
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    We’ve been through the muck,
    And with luck we make it.
    And some day we will rise-
    Maybe not like an eagle,
    But hell, even blue jays fly.

    The death of a truck.
    The tire blown and broken.
    The rain beats down-
    I’ll hold the umbrella
    While you work the jack.
    When we get our world fixed up
    And we’re back on the road,
    You drive and I’ll read the map.

    The storm howling,
    The way fogged and unclear.
    The music whistling and static-y,
    Us here, despite the load we carry,
    Singing along, off key, happy.




    Submitted on 2017-04-11 00:22:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the simplicity of the images, it's something very hard to capture in writing. You did a good job with it, maybe the poem could be even a bit shorter. Anyway, good writing!
    | Posted on 2017-04-11 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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