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    dots Submission Name: Superstardots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 621/961/451
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsSuperstardots
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    Best of dark intentions,
    Despite what they've failed to mention,
    All lies, binding their affections,
    Looking for methods to gain attention...

    They give up, I'll take this,
    Their rule made to break it,
    They proclaim, I'll dismiss,
    They love it, I'll hate it...

    My mislead admiration,
    Celebrating a failed emancipation,
    A society in final dissipation,
    Gifting of their wasted reputation.

    They give up, I'll take this,
    Their rule made to break it,
    They proclaim, I'll dismiss
    They love it, I'll hate it...




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      Disillusioned and contrarian, the scales falling from your eyes, no longer in love with the celebrity Superstar, stealing the very oxygen from the air we breath, stealing the very oxygen from our very own mouths before we even get a chance to swallow.

    Just as the robber barons stole our money in the 19th century, our celebrity superstars steal our attention in the 21st century.

    Hate them? Hate them? This is only the beginning. I hear the tumbrils rumbling on the cobblestones, and they are preparing to perform before Madame Defage.
    | Posted on 2017-05-02 00:00:00 | by yesmole | [ Reply to This ]


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