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    Author: KeeperOfLight
    ASL Info:    23, Vancouver BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 41/64/76
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I'm not good with people, but I know people
    My heart has been broken but now it's remade

    It's shape is a little funny
    When I talk it feels weird

    All convoluted
    Like it can't decide
    What the person should feel like

    When our eyes meet
    The heart quakes
    There was something there

    A word or some sound
    You made me feel weird

    Not sure what I'm going to do
    But it's faster now than it was
    2 seconds ago

    Oh you smiled
    With your eyes too
    I wonder if that's the heart

    Now you're just standing there
    You're making me all tense
    Not saying anything

    Stupid feelings




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      I'm glad I'm no longer in the mode of seeking a mate or anything. I can happily accept or simply ignore any new acquaintance with little thought as to what that person (who doesn't know me) might think they think of me.

    This poem reminds me of Charlie Brown...
    | Posted on 2017-05-12 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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