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    dots Submission Name: To Deny me...dots
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    Author: Jonathan Ryner
    ASL Info:    41 Male Round Rock, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 12/14/10
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
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    dotsTo Deny me...dots
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    How now though dost thou deny me,
    when thou dost need me so?
    How should I protect thee..my heart so deep?
    I offer desire and reach anon;
    nothing cuts so deep
    as the wound that thou has inflicted.
    Yet anon I pine for thee,
    incessant, incomplete, eternal.
    To no end I know thee,
    and to that,
    my misery gloams. Extending to the eternal
    forever and always.
    But always your's.




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