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    dots Submission Name: For the heart's soothingdots
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    Author: Jonathan Ryner
    ASL Info:    41 Male Round Rock, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 12/14/10
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
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    dotsFor the heart's soothingdots
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    For the heart's soothing...
    My softest will,
    may thou suffer less,
    at the wounding.
    Content thineself in the will of promise,
    things will improve,
    and time shall roll on.
    Even as thou ponder,
    it shall,
    and the balm of things will heal you.
    Thou shalt be amazed.




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      I love to be soothed. And I love to know everything will be alright. And all I have to do is let time roll on.

    So soothe, me soothe me, rock me in the bosom of Abraham, and listen to my warm muzzle whisper in your warm ear.
    | Posted on 2017-05-06 00:00:00 | by yesmole | [ Reply to This ]


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