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    dots Submission Name: untitleddots

    Author: Jonathan Ryner
    ASL Info:    41 Male Round Rock, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 12/14/10
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    Aching...my heart lies,
    and I have to will on,
    Dying would be a simple thing,
    and an end,
    Continuing, a promise of strife and misery,
    To see that face,
    that smile every morning,
    that magic
    that you
    are that eternal joy,
    even knowing that though I die before,
    you will be there.
    That is enough
    for me.

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