[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Breaking of a heartdots

    Author: JoKing
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 77/113/42
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 253
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 289

       Any comments welcome.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsBreaking of a heartdots

    It's the small things that chip and tear. A text left unread. A smile that doesn't goes up to the eyes. A laugh at a joke that wasn't yours. A misremembered anecdote. A short conversation. A quick kiss. Them - walking ahead. You - falling behind. It's the small things.

    Submitted on 2017-04-15 13:14:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      Yep, time to go pet my wife's feet.

    | Posted on 2017-04-27 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      The doubts that never quite leave often become the foundation for mistrust. Which leads me to believe that any downward spiral needs to be dealt with before it becomes the norm. Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2017-04-21 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    written by Daniel Barlow
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Bond written by saartha
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Every..... written by jackz
    AI written by poetotoe
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Summer written by layDsayD
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    written by Daniel Barlow
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    4th of July written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]