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    dots Submission Name: Breaking of a heartdots
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    Author: JoKing
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 77/113/42
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
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    dotsBreaking of a heartdots
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    It's the small things that chip and tear. A text left unread. A smile that doesn't goes up to the eyes. A laugh at a joke that wasn't yours. A misremembered anecdote. A short conversation. A quick kiss. Them - walking ahead. You - falling behind. It's the small things.




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      Yep, time to go pet my wife's feet.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-04-27 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      The doubts that never quite leave often become the foundation for mistrust. Which leads me to believe that any downward spiral needs to be dealt with before it becomes the norm. Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2017-04-21 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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