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    dots Submission Name: Wanton Desiredots
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    Author: Jonathan Ryner
    ASL Info:    41 Male Round Rock, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 12/14/10
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    dotsWanton Desiredots
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    What shall I do...
    but to love you?
    My world is you and you, my world
    and all I see is the roundness of your hips,
    your thighs, your eyes
    and all I desire
    my longing, my sleepless nights
    my every passion, my every pain.
    You are
    everything.




    Submitted on 2017-04-16 00:18:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      People always imagine that a world in which a person's entire meaning can be captured by another person's existence is this kind of romantic fantasy. To be honest, it is unhealthy, and the expression of a small mind. But let me be clear here: when you can find the world in another person, that's a different story.
    | Posted on 2017-04-17 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]


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