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    dots Submission Name: Lascivious Desiresdots
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    Author: Jonathan Ryner
    ASL Info:    41 Male Round Rock, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 12/14/10
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    dotsLascivious Desiresdots
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    Your every move
    step
    the curves of your shape,
    defined
    I watch, imagine
    and fantasize
    your every breath
    as you walk,
    as you sit,
    my longing, though I know your deepest parts
    is eternal,
    You tire of me, yet I am insatiable for you
    I want you
    and to know all of you
    that is you.




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