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    dots Submission Name: God’s Easter Giftdots
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    Author: poetotoe
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    God’s Easter Gift

    We come together to pray
    and thank God for his gift.
    His Son delivered that day
    on Christmas-Day the light
    the love of his begotten son
    a baby who lives on this day
    forever to be known as a gift.

    Jesus, a blessed gift from God
    the living God, is Jesus Christ
    on Christmas-Day God’s gift
    the world to see a baby born.
    A day, never to be forgotten
    for you and by one and all
    Noel! A Christmas child!

    Come, let’s sing praise
    God’s gift of this baby
    who lives on this day.
    A gift to one and all
    from God almighty
    his innocent child
    a gift of only one
    of Mary’s baby.

    Resurrected!




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      Very beautiful Tom! Christ Has Risen!
    | Posted on 2017-04-28 00:00:00 | by Blue7 | [ Reply to This ]


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