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    dots Submission Name: Sisters, Mothers, Friends, Foesdots
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    Author: JanePlane
    ASL Info:    125/F/everyplane
    Elite Ratio:    6.76 - 409/429/129
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSisters, Mothers, Friends, Foesdots
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    Sisters, Mothers, Friends, Foes

    We women cling to each other
    in gratitude
    with joy,
    in bewilderment
    with terror
    Out of love
    With love
    In love
    Of love

    We cling
    Wrapped tight
    Pushed up in a bow
    And we grasp
    Encircle
    Engulf
    Imbue
    With arms in an o
    With oh so much at stake

    This is what we do
    We pull ourselves in
    And we pull each other in
    We hold tight
    For. Dear. Life.
    We women
    cling
    to
    each other.





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      Jane,

    You express what I see in the women in my life. Always kind of a mystery to me that bonding and fluidity of bonding women have. Must feel really nice.

    Jim
    | Posted on 2017-04-23 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      I know this is gonna sound so outdated and chauvinistic but the underdogs must stick together. They have learned this down through history. Before I get myself in any more trouble let me say that I'm a firm believer in equality and even feminism. I'm one of those men who support women's communal desire for their own wellbeing. Albeit I'm somewhat appalled that this is still a necessary apparition. In fact I'm surprised that there aren't more women affected by misandry. Nuf said, an expressive write Jane that I fear I agree with.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2017-04-18 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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