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    dots Submission Name: Nowdaysdots
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    Author: concrete_rose
    ASL Info:    31/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 43/52/34
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       My interpretation of world events


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    dotsNowdaysdots
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    Politically correct are we Always watching, wondering

    Floating within ourselves State of confusion

    History repeats Bombs, regrets nowhere to go

    Hate is spreading Love is dwindling

    Enemy lines are abounding Where is our love?

    People who are different Not tolerated

    Not invited Insane chaos

    Reaching we are reaching Upwards for help

    Or not Where are the answers?

    We must be strong The fighters

    Always looking for resolution…

    Into Darkness this humanity

    Better look up Realize

    This is not a dream… People

    We the citizens the liberators

    The obliterators the nominators

    Torn By madness.

    War; it will be peace again After

    The smoke clears before the realization

    The temptation that lingers to never forgive

    All at once the merge of all societies to the end.




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      What a narrative of all the heinous acts of bigotry happening in our contemporary society. Good try to evoke the thinking.
    | Posted on 2017-06-21 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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