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Author: concrete_rose
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My interpretation of world events


Politically correct are we Always watching, wondering

Floating within ourselves State of confusion

History repeats Bombs, regrets nowhere to go

Hate is spreading Love is dwindling

Enemy lines are abounding Where is our love?

People who are different Not tolerated

Not invited Insane chaos

Reaching we are reaching Upwards for help

Or not Where are the answers?

We must be strong The fighters

Always looking for resolution…

Into Darkness this humanity

Better look up Realize

This is not a dream… People

We the citizens the liberators

The obliterators the nominators

Torn By madness.

War; it will be peace again After

The smoke clears before the realization

The temptation that lingers to never forgive

All at once the merge of all societies to the end.

Submitted on 2017-04-24 19:12:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  What a narrative of all the heinous acts of bigotry happening in our contemporary society. Good try to evoke the thinking.
| Posted on 2017-06-21 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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