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    dots Submission Name: Never another youdots
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    Author: concrete_rose
    ASL Info:    31/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 43/51/34
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Just a simple love poem to my husband


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    dotsNever another youdots
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    Never another you,
    to walk with me in this life,
    our souls to take flight,
    leaving worries on the ground.

    There would never be another one,
    to know that I love coffee black,
    dances in the rain,
    and movies to give heart attacks!

    There could never be anyone else,
    to kiss away life's fatigues,
    to help clean up the messes,
    that go with the day to day.

    There could never be another smile,
    to light up this tired soul,
    bringing in the sunlight,
    basking in your glow.

    Forever thankful that you were chosen,
    to walk through life with this alone,
    never to leave, always to be faithful,
    there would never be another you.




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      I thought it was beautiful, I feel the same about my husband!
    | Posted on 2017-07-02 00:00:00 | by MistidLovelac | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful write. You are so fortunate to find your soul mate, a blessing of divine in this life. Treasure your cherished gift and enjoy your life with your beau.
    | Posted on 2017-05-25 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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