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Never another you


Author: concrete_rose
ASL Info:    31/f/nc
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Words: 119
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Just a simple love poem to my husband


Never another you




Never another you,
to walk with me in this life,
our souls to take flight,
leaving worries on the ground.

There would never be another one,
to know that I love coffee black,
dances in the rain,
and movies to give heart attacks!

There could never be anyone else,
to kiss away life's fatigues,
to help clean up the messes,
that go with the day to day.

There could never be another smile,
to light up this tired soul,
bringing in the sunlight,
basking in your glow.

Forever thankful that you were chosen,
to walk through life with this alone,
never to leave, always to be faithful,
there would never be another you.




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  I've never believed in soulmates, but I do think what we accept openly in our first few experience of Loving Someone Else, gets narrower with maturity, so that we are less likely to accept flaws of others as we get older. If you found someone you can embrace wholly, then hang on to them as long as possible... the next bastard that shows up won't get that Free Ticket To Ride :)
| Posted on 2018-04-01 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought it was beautiful, I feel the same about my husband!
| Posted on 2017-07-02 00:00:00 | by MistidLovelac | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful write. You are so fortunate to find your soul mate, a blessing of divine in this life. Treasure your cherished gift and enjoy your life with your beau.
| Posted on 2017-05-25 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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