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    dots Submission Name: Proactivedots
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    Author: SincerWritinAsh
    Elite Ratio:    6.25 - 299/262/146
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
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    Description:
       I'm having nightmares. I thought writing would make something come of the nightmare, maybe the fear would lead to at least something productive. The writing left me feeling hollow and sadly its not a very good read.


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    I have an overactive imagination.
    I scare myself silly,
    Thinking that my child’s doll
    In the nursery is watching me.
    That it will crawl across the floor, that it is possessed.
    I have watched too many horror films.
    I am an over protective parent,
    I worry myself silly.
    Thinking that the tall stranger
    In the grocery is watching my child.
    That he will sneak across the aisle, that it will kidnap.
    I have watched too many news feeds.

    Being wary and watchful is proactive,
    If everything is a danger,
    I am unable to miss it.
    Unless you’re too distracted
    And the damage is already done.
    Being woken up from a nightmare,
    Splashed with hard reality,
    Realizing you can’t always be on the lookout…

    You must sleep at some point.




    Submitted on 2017-04-24 22:39:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      One can never be too paranoid. That simplifies things a bit because "paranoia" is defined as being an unreasonable fear, while actually nothing is unreasonable to suspect if the well being of yourself or your child is at risk.

    What remains to cope with this is faith. If life is a scripted sort of play then it was written with a purpose which really doesn't respect anyone worrying overmuch about it. Anchor into the strongest rock of what faith you have available and know that you can weather any storm that will test you.

    Sleep well.
    | Posted on 2017-04-26 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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