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    dots Submission Name: So What?dots
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    Author: bentnotbroken
    ASL Info:    25+/m/middle of nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 351/260/38
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 997
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       alternate title "I'll do what I've always done"


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    dotsSo What?dots
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    So what if I'm having a bad day?
    I'll do what I've always done;
    put one foot in front of the other and get through.

    So what if money is tight?
    I'll do what I've always done;
    make sacrifices and work extra to pay the bills.

    So what if work sucks?
    I'll do what I've always done;
    keep my head down, work, and make it through the shift.

    So what if I'm alone while everybody else has someone?
    I'll do what I've always done;
    fake a smile and say I'm okay.

    So what if you don't love me?
    I'll do what I've always done;
    smile when I see you and love you anyway.




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      Sounds like a well adjusted kind of person. Here's hoping some of life's better pleasures tend your way...

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-04-29 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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