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Written for Justin Sheeler my one and only great love.
Because he was just in time
just in time
Well You Came to me just in time
and made me and whole new page
you took my dull daze a shined your light
to me your oh so bright.
Just in time you came to my aid
and took my body and made me beg
for all your love you openly gave
and just for you I will behave
just in time you brought new hope
in love with you and that's no joke
with you I will never be broke
and have a life that is for us both
so now with time we both can stand just in time to see our DAD come to take us home to that great hall
where we both will love and stand tall for you and I will never fall from his grace above all
Submitted on 2017-04-28 14:37:37
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I thought this was a beautiful poem.
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