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    dots Submission Name: Ecstasy at My Placedots
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    Author: yesmole
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 6/11/6
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Finding contentment in ecstasy.


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    dotsEcstasy at My Placedots
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    Finding my place
    Knowing my place
    Is right here all the time
    As I fall through the quotidian net.

    Always able to return
    And a pleasure to step outside the door
    As it is a pleasure to step outside the quotidian.
    Out of reality and into my place.

    I am deeply in love with my place
    And my place is in love with me
    I dance around with others
    But fall helplessly into the arms held open for me.

    It takes my every cell
    My eyes roll upwards
    And I am in ecstasy
    Do you think this is too good for me?




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      I really liked this. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2017-08-25 00:00:00 | by tomeliot | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah, the order of release . To the question the answer to me is "No", if your doing something right it should be a joy . An, if it reaches to you from another side all the better . Work Hard , Play Hard . teika5
    | Posted on 2017-07-09 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes.
    | Posted on 2017-05-25 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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