The Mountain by yesmole

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Submission Name: The Mountain dots

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Author:	yesmole
Elite Ratio:	3.4 - 6/11/6
Words:	99

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
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Finding my way to the mountain.

The Mountain dots

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The sheer impossibility
Is enough to make me give up.

But it won't let me go.
It tears at me.

I seek refuge
For a time.

Then I think,
Perhaps I can climb the mountain.

I take the first step.
Oh, how many steps more?

I can feel the mountain
Pressing up through my feet.

And in return
I press down on the mountain.

We start to breath together
The crisp mountain air.

The mountain has been waiting for me,
Just as I have been waiting for the mountain.

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Keep our eyes on the prize , our sight grows dim with pain,,
in and around the lake , But then A moment that hepls us look back a laugh at some kind of pain that seem impassable ,,,,Teika5---
| Posted on 2017-07-04 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
There's nothing like a challenge, whether physical or not. I like the idea of bonding with the mountain/challenge into a one on one relationship thing.

Lloyd
| Posted on 2017-05-08 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.