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    dots Submission Name: Holding Handsdots
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    Author: yesmole
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 6/10/6
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Prose/Longing
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    Description:
       Holding hands while I write.


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    dotsHolding Handsdots
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    It's like driving a motor car
    I slip in
    It fits me like a glove
    And then starts to start, no, rather it roars to life.

    I confess it frightens me
    I really want someone to hold my hand
    I love to hold someones hand in the movies
    And I want someone to hold my hand when I write poetry.

    I deeply need to be soothed
    And what better than a warm hand
    Soothing and speaking hand to hand
    Bringing the words up, then springing from my warm muzzle.




    Submitted on 2017-05-06 19:47:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      A bit meta in a sense... you tend to write about your process... last two of writing... others of being.

    Almost like a retrospective of what you've just done.
    | Posted on 2017-07-27 00:00:00 | by homeless | [ Reply to This ]
      I really want someone to hold my hand
    I love to hold someones hand in the movies
    And I want someone to hold my hand when I write poetry.

    I don't think I want that but it's a nice sentiment. I'm glad you feel safe to write while someone watches and holds your hand. I used to share my work with lovers. I used to read their stuff and we would talk about it. I don't have that now and that is missed. But even then, I needed my "space" for the actual process of writing.

    This does give me something to ponder, though.

    Thanks for that.

    -Jane
    | Posted on 2017-05-08 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]


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