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    dots Submission Name: The Junk Roaddots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsThe Junk Roaddots
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    Pewter blinks of tarnished glass,
    crumbling and cracked,
    beneath dirt, oil and broke ambition -
    filthy reminder of the past,
    and where humanity's reflection -
    cracked.

    Ethereal wreckage of gnarled stars,
    lamented and wailed,
    abandoned light, hope and time –
    rubber soles on worn souls,
    who knows but they and us –
    what paths have been lost.

    With each step we leave behind,
    we pass someone life derides,
    alone and dead –
    broken on the junk road.




    Submitted on 2017-05-06 21:46:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The path of us in a restful state , left as we left it, how ever that might of been. Your free-verse reminds me of how sad a car look when on, Fire".
    teka5
    | Posted on 2017-07-10 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, I'm favoriting this. I just fell in love with the imagery. You never fail to disappoint , my friend. I apologize for never commenting on your earlier work even though I've always enjoyed it. Stay amazing.
    | Posted on 2017-05-21 00:00:00 | by eggshells | [ Reply to This ]


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