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    dots Submission Name: Euphemism of an Interstellardots
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    Author: SavedDragon
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       An influence of a tarot reading I did


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    dotsEuphemism of an Interstellardots
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    Unbeknownst to me
    The whale moans in the deep
    Countless undiscovered elements of the dark
    And of the night and the secret it keeps

    Evil and objectivity attack the spirit
    White rose shows clarity
    Wands glide far through the force of man
    Stepping into a physicality

    The influence of the fool on those below
    The finger points to the earth
    Elements represent cups of life
    Fire, water, air and earth

    Half empty to the needs of tools
    Walks of life now skilled to wishes
    The transformer channels the energy
    As we make our journey to beats of fools

    As above and so below
    The magician must focus
    But the fool still walks his path
    Drawing energy from both ends
    Hocus pocus to her wrath

    Heaven and earth and earth to heaven
    Shed the traits of the spirit within
    Symbolize and educate my soul
    The red rose of desire bleeds in

    Universal laws and fire will never be put out
    Ancient times represent spirituality
    The material world has no place for us
    Mental attention at its highest point and physicality

    Passive scrolls and women of secrets
    Times of fools to go within
    Above the ancient Egypt
    And temples of doom to fail and to sin

    United crowns of consciousness
    Maiden mother name of thee
    Throne of God and full of waxing moon
    Ruler the cycle and keeper of memories

    Mercy have thee and negative energy
    Pillar of temple of ISIS and Jerusalem now
    Water flows in the streams of consciousness
    The truth doesn’t surface now

    The depths of the unconscious symbolize my will power
    Unite me with the subconscious to set me free
    Bound me to the ground in which we walk
    But the mysteries of life and death consume thee

    An illusion of thought and time
    Pillows of clouds look down on trees
    Material world crowns our stars and queen of heaven
    Grudgingly adhere to those who are full and mother of thee

    Embrace my masculinity embrace your femininity
    Constantly become the pearl of mother nature
    Water of feelings and the gardens of life give comfort
    But stay down to rule the evergreens of nature

    The symbolism of cash
    Elitism and snobbishness displayed
    Order lost and rulers overthrown
    Overthrown when black and white make gray

    Dominion diminished on the top of the crown
    Structure collapses on a new moon
    Power of life and death
    Darkness with no light too soon

    Ancient wisdom with the ability
    Arms and legs with force of flesh
    Wing my solitude
    To carry out the ancient plan with no rest

    Walking fools we give our life
    Our levels of creation
    Thrown, gray stones brought to light
    Your glory is your crossed key of life
    Your signification

    Euphemism of an interstellar
    A translation of bleeding hearts
    The monks teach us to move fast up the tree
    The zodiac carved out by stars

    By Sharon Marroquin

    05/09/2017




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      Nice. Rather in depth and broad reaching, it makes me think that perhaps the audience consists chiefly of those who have at least dabbled a bit with mysticism but is probably lost on those who have not. As an ex-dabbler I appreciate your efforts here.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2017-07-30 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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