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Twisted


Author: eggshells
ASL Info:    23/M/WA
Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 31 /82 /75
Words: 44
Class/Type: Misc /Serious
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Twisted



The only miracle of life is it's end.
I can't wait for death.
The only reason God keeps me alive,
is He doesn't wanna deal with me after I die.

I might like this.

I'm so twisted.
Please save me.




Submitted on 2017-05-21 13:07:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Your opening line could not be more true.
I like it, short and to the point.
And, it reminds me of myself. I imagine I'll be sitting outside those heavily chained, pearly gates.
Where the party is at.

23 lead me here.
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| Posted on 2017-06-13 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]
  I have felt as low as this speaker feels. But later I have felt better. This speaks to how feelings can convince us that the world is ugly and life is useless but that later they can talk us into seeing the the sparkling blue water of the ocean or the eyes of a child or the touch of a hand as beautiful and worth pushing through the ugly for.


| Posted on 2017-05-28 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]


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