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Author:	jackz
ASL Info:	24/F/OH
Elite Ratio:	3.76 - 591/623/381
Words:	158

Class/Type:	Rant/Depressed
Total Views:	1160
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Bytes:	996

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RIP David Grayzanic
10-7-1976 ~ 06-08-2016

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My greatest gift is also my greatest loss

My greatest gift being your presence within my life,
Fate brought us together
Our love was like the wind
Never could be seen, but I felt it throughout our journey

My greatest accomplishment is also my biggest failure

My greatest accomplishment was loving you and allowing you to love me
Giving you the keys to unlock the darkest deepest parts of my past
Allowing myself to believe and know you are not like all the rest of them

My greatest loss is your presence within my life
Your laughter
Your love

My greatest failure was not valuing you as I should have
Taking your presence for granted
Holding onto your past mistakes & using this to fuel the fire

My greatest regret will always and forever be not letting go and moving on.
And now …
My greatest fear is now my reality

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