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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
    Total Views: 677
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       RIP David Grayzanic
    10-7-1976 ~ 06-08-2016


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    My greatest gift is also my greatest loss

    My greatest gift being your presence within my life,
    Fate brought us together
    Our love was like the wind
    Never could be seen, but I felt it throughout our journey

    My greatest accomplishment is also my biggest failure

    My greatest accomplishment was loving you and allowing you to love me
    Giving you the keys to unlock the darkest deepest parts of my past
    Allowing myself to believe and know you are not like all the rest of them

    My greatest loss is your presence within my life
    Your laughter
    Your love

    My greatest failure was not valuing you as I should have
    Taking your presence for granted
    Holding onto your past mistakes & using this to fuel the fire

    My greatest regret will always and forever be not letting go and moving on.
    And now …
    My greatest fear is now my reality




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