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    dots Submission Name: His Name is No Moredots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsHis Name is No Moredots

    What was his name,
    that made whispers,
    stasis is what we’re all in-
    lack of purpose,
    slave to basis in-
    hubris of material sarcophagus,
    cheap and broken,
    frozen within.

    What was his name,
    that made whispers,
    void of ink to explain-
    not even notation,
    history will inevitably avoid-
    our stilted decadence,
    carrion and deceit,
    discrete bargain.

    What was his name,
    that made whispers,
    war of philosophical lights-
    flashes from snuffed candles,
    dishonest to the core-
    Boogeymen of modern man,
    sowing salts and seed,
    weeds of free will in humanity.

    What was his name,
    no more-

    Submitted on 2017-05-28 22:09:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is wonderful and I love it. Every line is dripping with different and complex emotion. The first stanza is my favorite. That is the most beautiful and darkest way to convey human society that I have ever read. Pure poetic genius.
    This hits my heart like a canon ball shot point blank.
    I walk the sidelines as well.

    Thanks for sharing. It was truly dark and beautiful.
    | Posted on 2017-06-13 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]
      Which came first, the name or the meaning of the name?
    My own name is Lloyd, meaning "gray haired one"... ultimately that became true.
    | Posted on 2017-06-04 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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