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    dots Submission Name: Endless Gamedots

    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       The peril is in the answer

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    dotsEndless Gamedots

    Twenty-Three is stalking me
    (or I might be a bit insane)
    I took a peek behind the veil
    Now, They make me play Their game.

    We sit around the endless table,
    Monsters of every kind.
    Follow the rules and if you're able,
    you might just win back your life.

    It takes cunning, it takes wit
    So much strategy, I'm sick.
    It keeps me up every night.
    Indecision. What is right?

    Esoteric riddles asked
    to mundane minds, challenge tasked
    Find they answers that They seek.
    Pray your soul isn't weak..

    Draw the Rune, take Thy turn
    Touch the Fire, feel Him burn.
    Cut Thy finger, make it bleed.
    Free your Demons, let them feed...

    Phantom whispers in my head.
    Goddess, help me, I need rest.
    Calm the beasts beneath my bed
    Cease the beating in my chest

    Let them win this stupid game
    Give them all for what they came
    Every little fucking thing
    When lost to Love, what does it mean?

    Submitted on 2017-06-05 13:57:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I read the twenty third Rite, right. so thats what it means to be harmless yet tragic, this endless 23 is now my fav.., it's loyal as the spider , to the end ,what a truth, i like to fatter this one. Teika5
    | Posted on 2017-08-27 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Put it out thy flame if thats the way or put forth a vile , we spin round and around , on a wheel thats either forgiving or tragic . Every little thing is detailed in a match we might win , nothing is fur-sure . Teika5 i really like your style and the cause you come from.
    | Posted on 2017-07-10 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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