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    dots Submission Name: My Husbands, The Time Travelerdots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 28/41/44
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 672
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    Description:
       Living in a constant state of De'ja Vu


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    dotsMy Husbands, The Time Travelerdots
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    Somewhere between this life
    and a few lives long passed
    I met you, I wasn't meant to
    But it happened, and I'm glad
    The first times I met you
    I recognized you instantly.
    stranger, that you were
    unknown, yet so familiar
    and, Stranger, still is how we met
    As if it was our first time,
    our last time,
    and hadn't happened yet.




    Submitted on 2017-06-13 11:37:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I was lost with your work , time went too and fro , but i didn't get lost with that time. What a love story , It's like your a space traveler too . A planetary wait . You'll capture something here . The type of pice this is , reminds me , of{ Ray Bradbury }_{ The MARTIAN CHRONICLES }
    Teika 5 I really like your work, I'm a sucker for this type of material .
    | Posted on 2017-07-16 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]
      Living on the clock face of the universe
    can become a daunting task
    eternity past like a day delayed
    by each minute in an ancient mask

    Just a few thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2017-06-17 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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