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Temporal Displacement

Author: endlessgame23
ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 28 /42 /44
Words: 125
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Broken
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Broken flux capacitors are extremely difficult to repair when outside of tangible dimensions.

Temporal Displacement

I live moment to moment
Or one endless second.
Depends on which Plane we're flying.
Some Times, forever is a lonely minute
Other Times, a second lasts eternally.
Times never end.
Or begin, we're all just waiting..


All the clocks have stopped in
Different hours, biorhythms, and cosmic vibrations
I've never been good at Keeping Time
He always seems to disappear or be misplaced
Illusive, imaginary, and mischievous Time
Lost in circles going 'round and 'round
A broken mind is an awful place
when it's only task is to continue


For what?
You might ask
And that is the very question
that keeps Us right here


Submitted on 2017-06-13 11:54:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really dig, the phases you took me within the pice . I come from a broken mind , that awaits the time , an gets pass by. Still I wait and labor for excitement, waiting for med.'s , and passing dull time . So, yeah the work has touch a spot in me , and thats the goal right.....Teika5
| Posted on 2017-07-10 00:00:00 | by teika5 | [ Reply to This ]

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