Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: kaleidoscopic eyesdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: rev.jpfadeproof
    ASL Info:    27/m/nyc
    Elite Ratio:    6.08 - 366/364/154
    Words: 315
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 634
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1928



    Description:
       Another I needed to just throw out of me tonight...


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotskaleidoscopic eyesdots
    -------------------------------------------



    When I was a child I’d often wondered what the world would
    Look like if my eyes were kaleidoscopic-

    If they would restore my innocence and blaze my world back to color
    Much like spring strikes motley hues into the white bone of winter.

    I suppose at birth we all enter this world enchanted.
    We are like the cub that chases the butterfly to the river and finds the
    Rainbow trout dive-bombing the prancing waters.

    So one spectacle bleeds into another and then another and yet another; and the stained glass wings of the butterfly yield to the pink horizon streak etched amid the trout’s leopard-speckled skin.

    But innocence is such a fragile facet, so easily shattered and so short-lived.
    It’s our internal firefly that lives fiercely and astonishes.

    There is a storm only understood by the child that has their virtue gnawed. The heavy, lurid breath of that wind is caked on their skin; the

    Sour taste always on the tongue; the cloud’s heavy body continually felt; The sight of its twisted form branded upon the eyes that once saw a 1000 Trees in a pinecone.

    As a man I realize that it’s not the physical mechanical processes
    Of the iris, the cornea, and the cones, but rather the soul, the spirit, and the mind, from which kaleidoscopic strength sprigs-

    Its that which enables one to see the world as a cathedral
    Forged by the hands of God-

    And His hands stretch forth from my wrist
    To mend the shattered visage of the abused, of the lonely,
    Of the downtrodden, and to

    Redeem their garments of despair with the shawl of spring

    Unto newness of life…

    DiCicco Cosentino ©








    Submitted on 2017-06-16 21:47:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      From beginning to end, this was beautiful. I cannot properly articulate how this made me feel. All I can say really, is Thank You.
    | Posted on 2017-06-24 00:00:00 | by endlessgame23 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201812

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Linger written by saartha
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Summer written by layDsayD
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry