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    dots Submission Name: Always to My Leftdots
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    Author: endlessgame23
    ASL Info:    25/f/The Endless Table
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 26/38/30
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 303
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    Bytes: 1489



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       Inter-dimensional True Love


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    dotsAlways to My Leftdots
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    From the beginning, you were just a glimpse.
    A fleeting visage to see from the farthest corner of my eye.
    An imaginary phantom forever haunting my mind.
    In searching for the you, You'd never be.
    I have been displaced from Reality and Time
    The friend I'd desperately need.
    Waltzing beyond my burning fingertips
    Ravenous for one little touch
    to satisfy the Empty inside.

    Yet, you remained frustratingly intangible.
    Always stoically watching me struggle
    to perceive your imperceptible presence.
    Eternally evading my comprehension.
    At times I hated you for being there
    and not there all in the same selfish glance..
    Every moment sacrificed to Time's endless expanse.
    I begged myself not to care,to stop driving myself mad,
    Finally realize that I should be glad
    that you'd never fully reveal yourself.
    Allowing me to heal my mental health.
    But, even then I I could not convince my heart
    that I wasn't in love with a Ghost
    who knew me better than most
    without ever having spoke.

    In the end, I grew to Love
    the fading, starry glimmer
    of my phantom companion's peripheral shimmer.
    Eventually, I learned to fall asleep
    to the silent whispers.
    Echoes of nothings ever said
    outside the Heavenly confines
    of a whimsical and lonely mind.




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