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    Author: teika5
    ASL Info:    46 / m/ artesia ca
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 26/6/11
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
    Total Views: 228
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    Description:
       The mobbing of Angeles , leave sent behind. As Spell


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    The air was lit that day .
    Flames off my skin sooth my eyes
    Blues and oranges dazzled

    but there was something else
    something unspoken in the crowd
    smells seem to talk to us as a whole
    together united,
    still the blend sat right
    no kid cry-ed out, " what is this"

    It was all good (?)
    , like this sort of thing
    happen from time to time .

    We jam and swayed , judging nothing
    but question's , enter into our talks
    as reasoning fell on our coffee cups
    were we bitter or sweet .

    reasoning was , all that was
    Bright smells of of life toooo....




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